Shopping has become a favourite past time for many young people. Why is that the case? Should they be encouraged to utilise their free time in a better way?
Most of the young people prefer shopping as a leisure activity. There can be several reasons for this. However, there are also some concerns that it is better to use their free time for more productive activities than shopping.
Firstly, if we consider the reason for this development, the busy lifestyle in the current society with high spending power can be identified as the main reason. For instance, nowadays, most of the young people are earning high income compared to the past. Especially the young crowed in cities falls under this category. However, their life has become busy with these high earnings jobs and as a result, they tend to spend their leisure time shopping as a relaxation activity. Moreover, they can justifiably spend some money on shopping because of the effort they put to earn that. Secondly, trending gadgets and fashion attracts them to shopping malls and consequently, they spend most of their free times doing shopping.
On the other hand, if they could utilise their free time to do something useful it would be beneficial for their future. To explain, young people can spend their free time to do some other relaxing activities such as painting, writing or playing an instrument. Such activities help to relax the mind while developing useful skills to use in life. In addition, these activities can save money and could even help to earn extra income as well. However, learning these skills also required some effort and therefore it should be an individual’s choice to learn those. Young people should be educated about these other options to spend their time rather than spending time on shopping. Nevertheless, it should be a personnel choice to do any activity in their life.
In conclusion, although there are some useful activities to engage in free times, young people should be allowed to choose their own activity which is suitable for their lifestyle.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-16 | virtualpathum | 56 | view |
- Industrial pollution is increasing all around the world. Some people say that the most effective way to tackle the problem is to Tax companies that are causing the pollution. Others argue that, there are other ways to control the situation. 78
- In some countries, it is illegal now to reject applicants due to their age? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 84
- Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- People are getting over dependent on the internet and phones Is it a positive or negative development 78
- In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas 82
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08860759494 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57541281384 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1966624242 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5882352941 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7647058824 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334222452207 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118688118001 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784111076861 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2238542881 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030853723667 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.