The shortage of Housing has given several social consequences. Only government can solve the problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write at least 250 words.
shortage of houses is a huge problem and especially in big cities. it acts as a magnet for the young generation. Some people believe that only government bodies can solve this issue and I totally agree with this because this kind of situation is not possible to solve by common people. In this essay, I will explain the reason and solutions.
The main reason for the problem is that increase in population leads to the problem of shortage of houses in the urban areas. Everyday youngesters are coming to big cities to try their luck and endup settling their and as a result, it is become a dream for the common man to buy their own house. For Instance - big cities like hyderabad, delhi and mumbai in india is a very overy crowded cities from all over the country because of more employment opportunities and quality education everyday people are coming to this cities. Therefore, if government plan to organise a city structure especially residendial areas that would help. However, the government has the power and authority to demolish the old bildings and make apartments and houses so that more people can live.
Futhermore, government should make new rules for the property rates for example - property rates should be fixed and people can purchase directly from the owner because recently, as we seen real estate change the market demand.for example - agents or brokers purchase land on lower rates and sell to common people at very high rate this Affect the market price.
To conclude, these kind of problems only government can resolve and with better statergies and decision but individual can help them by giving suggestions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Shortage
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... shortage of houses in the urban areas. Everyday youngesters are coming to big cities to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ling their and as a result, it is become a dream for the common man to buy their ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...education everyday people are coming to this cities. Therefore, if government plan ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ffect the market price. To conclude, these kind of problems only government can resolve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96739130435 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56266636524 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56884057971 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1798043493 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1987548994 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753124248745 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442790074073 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121058747025 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142556839973 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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