Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Proper education and good healthcare facilities are the two-determining factors which will impart to the country’s economic growth. Although there are some denizens who believe that education and medical care should be funded by the government, others might have an opinion that the payment for the same is the sole responsibility of the community itself. This essay will argue that the government of the country should be held responsible for ensuring an enlightened and healthy people.
To embark on, undoubtedly, access to education and health care is a basic human right. Along with creating political and social awareness it also creates employment opportunities. It should be the responsibility of the government to make school education free up to 18 years of age apart from this, encourage the younger generation to pursue schooling. Moreover, it should also provide free health maintenance, by introducing health insurance schemes. As a result, people will not fear to pay a large share of their salary expensive treatments. A healthier society will contribute to the overall economic, political and social enhancement of a nation. For example, according to the recent report Canada has the highest literacy rate and a healthy society because of the free education and health care facilities provided.
On the contrary, making education and health care treatments free for all the people is not possible as it will not only put pressure on the government to reserve lump sum amount of the budget but will also put a burden on the society as they will have to pay huge taxes to the ministry.. Due to this many parents cannot afford to send their children to schools or provide them good treatment. For example, in the USA the education and medical facilities in not free, sadly, it pressurizes the society by paying extravagant price on education and health
To conclude, I strongly agree in order to have a well-established and politically strong nation the management should make it a point to provide free edification and Medicare facilities to its society where not only the literacy rate is high but the people are living a fit and healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1384180791 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95021437905 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522598870056 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.019126433 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.923076923 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230076190286 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797641213891 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668182527252 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140887444755 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611493759765 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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