Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Proper education and good healthcare facilities are the two-determining factor which will impart to the country’s economic growth. Although, there are some denizens who believe that education and medical care should be funded by the government, others might have an opinion that the payment for the same is only the responsibility of the community itself. This essay will argue that the government of the country should be held responsible for ensuring an enlightened and healthy people.
To embark on, access to education is a basic human right. It not only raises political and social awareness but also creates employment opportunities. It should be the responsibility of the government to make the school education up to 18 years of age to encourage the younger generation complete their schooling. For example, according to the research Canada has 98% of literacy rate because of the free school education provided by its government. Moreover, the country’s administration should make sure to provide free health maintenance to its community, by introducing health insurance schemes. As a result, the people will not fear to pay a large share of their salary for doctor appointments and expensive treatments. A healthier society will contribute to the overall economic, political and social enhancement of a nation For Instance, in UK people are issued with health cards which covers more than 50% of health protection cost.
On the contrary, making education and health care treatments free for all the people is not possible as it will not only require the government to reserve lumpsum amount of the budget but will also put a burden on the society as they will have to pay huge taxes to the ministry. For example, in USA the education and medical facilities in not free, sadly, it puts a pressure on the society because the price of education and health protection are extravagant. Additionally, parents cannot afford to send their children to schools because of the sky rocketing fees. For example, In India, many people who are below the poverty line cannot send their children to school because of the high fees and neither can afford the expensive treatment costs
To conclude, I strongly agree in order to have a well established and politically strong nation the management should make it a point to provide free edification and Medicare facilities to its society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18041237113 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95992559503 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510309278351 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3040401135 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234301570258 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846545498546 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574772642394 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143101882256 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661521985422 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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