Should government make decisions about people's life style, or should people make their own decisions.
People’s lifestyle has been drastically changed from the last few decades. In the past, people used to live a simple and healthy life, but in the current scenario, there is a huge rise in the number of people who want a lavish lifestyle. This essay will analyze both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, people living in urban cities believe that traveling and parting are the ways of living a satisfactory life. They also believe that there should be no interruption from anyone in life, but if they break the law and order, they will be put behind bars. For example, several people used to drink and drive late at night which is a criminal offense, and in this situation, the government takes strict action against them.
On the other hand, the government should take decisions for the young generation as they are not well educated. For example, In India, many youngsters are addict to alcohol, drugs, and smoking, which in turn will affect their health. They are not much involved in their career and education In one survey conducted by the government among people of Punjab last year, it is analyzed that 40% of young children are inclined towards drug habits and this number is rising every year. . Government is looking for the people who are involved in drug peddling and spreading bad habits in the society.
To conclude, everyone has the right to live their own life in their way, but the government should also focus on their lifestyle so they can’t harm their own life and, they will not spread bad habits in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72862453532 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35534590262 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546468401487 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7946816014 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.636363636 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281335327313 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984391709864 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618302283414 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170375195189 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363456429505 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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