In today’s globalization, one biggest challenge for developing countries is unemployment among the youth who leave their school early. Because of many reasons, one reason, they are not able concentrate on studies due to involvement in drug abuse, pick-pocketing and several other bad habits which will be explained further.
I strongly agree with the statement, as many companies require, if they are fresher and applying for the opportunity, at least they must have completed their graduation from any university. Also, there requirements varies according to the position as they mostly hire experienced profession having soft skills and technical skills. Many countries like India, where population is 1.3 billion, it is difficult for government to provide employment to undergraduate students only, this makes their situation worse for drop-outs. Ultimately, they indulge themselves in labor work to meet their end needs.
There are several other challenges they face during their adulthood. Firstly, drug abuse and alcoholism which affects health; secondly, racial discrimination which affects their mental health; thirdly, child marriage; lastly, natural disasters like flood makes their living condition worse. In one of the Indian TV shows, it is reported that, in every one hour one individual commits suicide because of unemployment. This could be the reason of low life expectancy rate in the country.
To conclude, Unemployment remains biggest hurdle for youngsters and specifically for school-leaves. However, natural disaster, early marriage, sexual abuse will remain challenges for young people. Although, there are my campaigns are going on to promote safety among the young people, but there is still long way to go.
- Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school leavers in most countries How far do you agree with this assessment What other challenges face young people today 78
- Should government make decisions about people s life style or should people make their own decisions 74
- Walking is known to be beneficial for health yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days What are the reasons for this What can be done to address this problem 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'remains the biggest'.
Suggestion: remains the biggest
...he country. To conclude, Unemployment remains biggest hurdle for youngsters and specifically ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94028789996 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67816091954 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.685400806 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.769230769 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170440420716 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641380844739 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684457392387 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103035100623 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447434159877 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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