Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?
There is a policy in multiple countries to provide government benefits to unemployed people. This enables them to sustain while they are hunting for a job. There is a school of thought that such candidates must in return do dome community service as a payback. This essay completely endorses this thought.
It has been observed that longer a person searches for a job, wider the career gap becomes. This in turn makes it even harder to seek a jobs sine employers do not prefer to hire unemployed candidates. The job seeker ends up in a vicious circle. Volunteering towards a community service would enhance the skill set of such people and would also heighten their self-confidence. This will in turn increase their probability to be hired in the job market. For instance, an unemployed teacher could teach underprivileged students without any fees. This would not only benefit the society but would also sharpen the mentor skill of that teacher.
Government would also gain from this unpaid contribution of unemployed candidates. Since no salaries have to be paid, money saved could be used in the betterment of the society. To illustrate, if government is providing benefits worth 100 dollars to a job seeker and in return gets even t 50 dollars worth of unpaid service, the overall government expenses reduces by half.
To conclude, there are many people in society who do not have any source of income and are drawing government benefits. Volunteer contribution from them towards social service will be a win-win situation both for the benefit provider and the seeker.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
... in turn makes it even harder to seek a jobs sine employers do not prefer to hire un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04580152672 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79993506797 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4874537689 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18900559995 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613972501702 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345906222646 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120275738421 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123183364496 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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