Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
Economical, religion or racism leads to poverty in many countries. Several nations think that they should share their wealth with these poorer countries, to help and improve their people lives. Others believe is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to take care after its people.
On one hand, wealthy countries think that many sectors should be shared with un-wealthy nations, in order to provide assistance. First, they should provide food since many are facing starvation and this will lead to an unhealthy life, people will die, and many diseases will spread, therefore they must help in providing health treatment, vaccinations and medicines, especially for kids.Second, education is one of the most important things they must share with, where teenagers and children's need to be educated and know how to read, write. For example, some African countries such as Ghana and Nigeria, people are facing poverty and starvation due to many issues in their countries, that’s why many organizations like UN, IOM and WFP are helping in providing assistant in many sectors to protect and change their lives.
On the other hand, several disagree with the point that wealth nation should share their wealth to poorer countries, since it is the responsibility of their governments. First, governments should help and provide a good way of living for its people, they need to open new job opportunities, where their citizens won't migrate searching for work and food. Second, governments must provide security and education for citizens, these two factors will help them to feel safe and there is a reason to stay and made their best to support their countries. For example, the last few years, Ethiopia became the most developed African country by building and improving their economy and working to keep its citizens in their country, by providing jobs, security, education and healthy life, therefore people are encouraged to stay.
As a conclusion, some think sharing and assisting poorer countries is the best option to developed this countries and others believe governments should rely on themselves. In my opinion, I think if governments stop corruption and start working to develop their country even with the help of nations, to build a better and developed nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Second
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25543478261 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70854538455 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.6463731683 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.166666667 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369681039306 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156717957119 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998413970437 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247011448373 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092359544911 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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