Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? Give your opinion.
Although it is thought by a few individuals that the rich countries must divide their wealth among poorer countries, others believe that the citizens of poorer nations are a responsibility of their governments. In my opinion, I agree that the governments are responsible for the taking care of its citizens and this essay will discuss this view followed by the conclusion.
First of all, it is the right of all citizens to have basic facilities from the government because people pay taxes to have such services available to them. The money from these taxes must be used for the betterment of the society only. In other words, the facilities like health care, clean water and education are required by everyone so it is right to say that these must be provided by the governments. For example, recent poll results published by the Times magazine states that approximately 95% of people support tax system only because this money is spent on welfare of people.
Secondly, the poorer nations cannot always rely on the aid from wealthy countries. As the relationships between the countries are not always the same, so in case of a conflict, residents of underprivileged country can suffer greatly. For instance, in 2002, the conflict between the United States and Iraq saw thousands of people die in Iraq because the United States stopped its food aid. Clearly, depending on other countries can cause a great deal of problem for nations.
To conclude, some people think that the wealth should be shared by the rich countries, however, I believe that it is the responsibility of every government to take care of its citizens by providing all the necessities of life and not always looking for foreign help.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97212543554 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76634426425 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.151913651 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.727272727 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24746628725 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855561619655 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998860346558 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151293206339 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933571917922 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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