Should young children be encouraged to follow a strict set of rules based on cultural tradition or should they be allowed to behave freely? Discuss both and views and share your opinion.
Based on cultural traditions, young children are employed to observe a firm set of rules. However, it is argued that these young ones should be permitted to live carelessly. In my opinion, being well cultured and living a successful life is more important than the outcome of living freely.
Firstly, youngsters who are being led to follow rules tend to make the right choices in life. For example, a child that is well guided by the parents at home and teachers in the learning environment hardly succumb to negative influence by peer pressure. More also, they are made to understand being successful in the future is highly dependent on how disciplined they are. Although this may not be a pleasant scenario initially, these children learn to adapt to the set of rules and regulations guiding them.
On the other hand, allowing them act freely may be detrimental as they are more vulnerable to making poor choices. For instance, a 6 years old child may choose to become violent and because it is allowed, the behavioral pattern of this child is moulded in that form. Secondly, they also do not receive proper direction at home and school which may make them decide to become school dropouts and/or touts. Consequently, the crime rate of the society will increase.
In conclusion, following strict laid out rules by young children is of crucial importance than when they are able to live and act as they choose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88429752066 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6117271634 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603305785124 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4858723233 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287226415823 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983365360629 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702852645901 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168598250286 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637659285919 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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