Some believe museums should entertain people while others believe their purpose is to educate. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The museum is an interesting place to visit. It is often visited by adults and children on personal or school excursions. Some people believe museums should solely be for the purpose of education while some others think it should offer some form of entertainment. To illustrate this, both line of thoughts would be analyzed.
Firstly, it is widely known that historical artifacts, ornaments and sculptures etc are kept in the museum, which is mainly the reason people visit in order to acquire knowledge. For example, most schools in Nigeria include visiting museums in the curriculum as a a way of educating the pupils about history. In this way, they have a clear knowledge of past events and appreciate it more because the visuals. Hence, it is proved that the museum is very purposeful in education.
However, on the other hand, the belief that museums should be for entertainment is also a strong fact. An example is seen in a certain museum in the Eastern part of Nigeria. There are war ships, armored tanks, jets and underground bunkers. Some of them are being used as restaurants, bars and tourist attraction. People come from various parts of the country to have a feel of having to dine in the war ships and jets and also visit the underground bunker with their families. This therefore proves that the museum should be visited for entertainment.
As seen above, both views hold strong reasons. In my opinion, people should be able to visit the museum for whichever reason the choose, although the benefits of visiting for educational purposes outweighs that of entertainment. In the foreseeable future, museums should be solely for the purpose of education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99285714286 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74597107466 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5119996972 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2352941176 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297267897818 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879393462417 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963223070096 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190978622807 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855332099191 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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