Should young people follow the older people's example or its good for them to challenge older people's opinion and thoughts. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
People have different opinion, some believe that it is better for the young generation to follow the path shown by the aged people, whereas other assert that it will be beneficial if youngsters argue on the conventional view point and try to thing the things. This essay will discuss both the area of thoughts, however, II believe that mix of both conventional and modern thinking must be followed according to different circumstances.
Pitching into the first area of discussion, senior citizens have huge practical experience off the life. If young generation wants to be successful they can opt for the better future by following the path shown by ancestors. For example, many famous people who have worked in various domains generally write their autobiography, so that young generation can lead a better life by knowing the lifestyle to be followed or the hard work to be persuaded in order to achieve the name and the fame. Like, Mahatma Gandhi, the famous politician in India is still admired by many for his leading the life through peace and harmony. Therefore experience and thoughts of aged people will definitely helpful to the youth to achieve success ahead.
On the other hand, considering the views that old people's belief must be challenged. Many times our ancestors has developed some superstitious and wrong belief, and masses are following blindly them, which will hamper individual and nation's growth. For example some aged people opine that women's must not be allowed to opt for job outcomes, as are efficient in household tasks only, which is undoubtedly a wrong belief. Hence, coming generation has to argue on this thinking and try to bring the positive change in the society for the citizen and country whole.
In conclusion, it will be better if young generation follow the positive way of living shown by the elders, but keeping their mind alert for the things which can deter their progress , they have to follow the experience learned by ignoring the ill practices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03313253012 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63374491703 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545180722892 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3758910322 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.25 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19566822485 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747992416153 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471881321397 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121947146571 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447202658847 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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