Smacking children is the best from of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days it has become difficult to discipline children. Some people believe that the best way to teach children discipline is by physical punishment. This essay will argue that smacking children is totally unacceptable but I disagree.
Parents think of various ways to discipline their children. People as parents always need to monitor children’s behavior, and try to educate them in the proper way. However, in traditional families, they used discipline children to get good manners by authority. This does not promote trust between adults and children. For example, some parents used to physical punishment to prevent them doing impolite behaviors. Therefore, children can be disciplined by parents within physical punishment, but it also makes them scared to make mistakes.
On the other hand, corporal punishment creates an atmosphere of fear and anger. Children who are punished physically may become shy or resentful. Furthermore, children might be affected by the fear of punishment and they will be afraid of making mistakes. For instance, they will fear telling parents that they failed their exam in school. It not only changes their attitude facing the failure, but also makes them choose to be dishonest. All things considered, the statement that corporal punishment is the best way to discipline children is completely unacceptable.
To sum up, this essay has argued that smacking children is inappropriate while some people still believe physically punishing children. In my opinion, physically punishing children is definitely not the correct method to discipline them.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5306122449 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88639832553 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559183673469 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6869724608 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.7058823529 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4117647059 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201614855228 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804518460548 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528124906623 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152604958285 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542263726924 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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