In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this.
Recently Curfew system being implemented, in deferent area of Us, in regards to safety of teenagers, who not permit to go out of the house at night time, except if they are someone in escort with them, in this essay I discus what is Curfew benefits, and I will share my opinion.
On one hand The curfew system show beneficial result in safety term and protection In favor of teenagers, by keeping them far way of dangers troubles at night, like for example the night is preferred time, for drug dealer who are looking, for the opportunity to be close up to teenagers and influx them to try drugs and after that they will addicted, Moreover lot of crime took in place at night time and curfew is protecting and avoiding teenagers to be in contact with criminal peoples, in addition keep them way form bed people who are seeking for Sex with young either with girls or boys.
On the other hand some people counting curfew system as deprivation of liberty of teenagers, and impacting negatively on growth of their personality and responsibility, by being surrounding and protecting them all the time, which will cause problem and bed Attitude on them, like depend all the time to someone how look after them while they are out doors.
On my opinion the curfew system preparing good environment, for the coming generation to live in safe area, and growth with good people, with less problems and trouble, therefore many country see good result of that system.
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Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
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Suggestion: addict
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72941176471 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51095561811 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560784313725 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.716265827 49.4020404114 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 301.5 106.682146367 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.75 20.7667163134 307% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.25 7.06120827912 301% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250270213458 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157390882366 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799929904949 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157390882366 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799929904949 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 13.0946893788 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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