In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
Due to globalization, scientists have predicted that people will be speaking one universal language in the near future. I believe that this phenomenon will have a negative impact on the culture and employment ratio of a country.
Undoubtedly, a single language universal language has its own benefits. Most important advantage will be easy communication between people. Relations between nations will improve which will result in the local and global economic growth. For instance, tourists can travel anywhere without the fear of having a language barrier. Many times, it has been reported that vacationers suffer a lot mentally and physically just because of miscommunication. There have been instances where people have landed in legal trouble as they were not able to comprehend the rules and regulations of the host country.
Nevertheless, the negative effects far outweigh the positive developments. One of the major adverse impacts will be damage to the culture of a country. Language represents the cultural identity of the people. Slowly and steadily, the local languages will perish and the history and culture will be lost with it. For example, recent studies suggest that some parts of Africa have lost 20% of its indigenous languages and traditions in the past century due to the adoption of English as a global language. It is an alarming trend because it will eventually lead to a loss of historical languages and precious artifacts and manuscripts will be left without any understanding.
Furthermore, the employment of a large section of society will be lost. With globalization, travel has become much easier and people travel to different places nearly every time of the year. Tourism is one of the major industry of a country and a big marker of its GDP. Local guides and language interpreters contribute a lot to the economy. If everyone would speak the same language, no one would need them and it will result in huge unemployment. Also, the local population will also lose interest in their own background and way of life sooner or later.
To conclude, having a global language has its own benefits but it will create unemployment and risk the culture and history of a country. Therefore, I strongly believe that it will have a negative effect on society.
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- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening what can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish production. 84
- In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16353887399 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92778579272 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533512064343 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2632311416 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5454545455 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.04692530953 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0153060409292 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0175599325117 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0270512876227 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174581995194 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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