Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening what can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish production.
Increase in quantity of garbage leads to health problems and air quality day by day. Many countries are getting adjusted in this kind of environment, where some tries to get fashioned by using latest products. Here, this essay will depict the major causes of produce in rubbish like buying new things and not using bins, which can be solved by the help of government thorough seminars and putting on charges.
Getting latest mattresses instead of adjusting with what we have? Firstly, comfortability is a serious need for people in which old things are thrown in garbage stuff. For example, old washing machines got replaced by new one's having dryer facility in them. thus, use of more electricity is nothing in front of getting easy. Secondly, time shortage makes people think about roads, vacant areas dustbins. For instance, one getting late for job do not have time to find a dump bin nearby. As a result, no one wants to know about bad outputs from their activities. environment gets polluted just because of our own minor mistakes.
As everything is possible in this world, similarly government can do anything to overcome this impact. To start with, seminars could be fruitful to control rubbish production. responsible persons should be selected to maintain gatherings and introduce people about hazards of this produce. Such as, in 2019, students of Columbia college Vancouver came in front for volunteering in cleaning the roads of downtown. Therefore, people getting ashamed could learn to protect environment. In addition, it is not a cup of tea to solve this problem easily. For example, some masses do not want to follow the rules and regulations of a city. government can overcome these crisis by putting charges on the people getting caught while throwing waste on the areas not made for it. thus, it's not the task of single person, everyone should think it as his responsibility.
In conclusion, old things getting repaired, after the rules made for saving environment can bring a massive change to put stop on rubbish production. Moreover, seminars and charges on people going against these rules could enhance to overcome this crisis as well.
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- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening what can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish production. 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the latest'.
Suggestion: using the latest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orough seminars and putting on charges. Getting latest mattresses instead of adj...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Getting the latest'.
Suggestion: Getting the latest
...eminars and putting on charges. Getting latest mattresses instead of adjusting with wh...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...new ones having dryer facility in them. thus, use of more electricity is nothing in ...
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Suggestion: Environment
...bout bad outputs from their activities. environment gets polluted just because of our own m...
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Suggestion: Responsible
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Suggestion: Government
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Message: Did you mean 'this crisis' or 'these crises'?
Suggestion: this crisis; these crises
...ions of a city. government can overcome these crisis by putting charges on the people gettin...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ste on the areas not made for it. thus, its not the task of single person, everyone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08938547486 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64821116559 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594972067039 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5594497588 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8181818182 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186503403897 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476789514645 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518635562459 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10799734533 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334082661913 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.