Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. Which approach is better in your opinion and why?
In today's world, some residential areas in metropolises are created by high-rise towers while others made of houses consuming much space. However, I firmly concur that building multistory apartments will provide better accommodations for the city residents. In this essay, I will explain why it is better to build multistory apartments instead of villas or independent houses.
Apparently, there are several reasons to support the approach of constructing sky-scrapers in the megacities which will be beneficial for locals. To commence with, the fact that the rapidly increasing population in metro cities has always been a concern which arises of multiple problems such as pollution, traffic congestion, and providing an adequate amount of living spaces to everyone. Since we are dealing with problem of living spaces in this essay, so, to tackle this problem, the government took a decision of constructing multistory apartments instead of bigger houses because a big house can provide a space to a single-family whereas flats will provide more rooms for multiple families. Secondly, there will be enough space left in cities to build commercial complexes such as malls, multiplex cinemas, and hospitals. This kind of construction is vital because it will create employment opportunities for city residents to earn their bread and butter.
Furthermore, every person cannot afford the price to buy a bigger house such as villas in cities because of the exorbitant price whereas he or she could buy a flat which will be cheaper than an independent house. Additionally, living in a society with multistory apartments gives the advantage to get socialize with neighbors, especially those who come from a different culture and religion. For instance, I spent my childhood living in a flat where I made friends and get along with them every day. Nowadays, I am living in an independent house where I do not get a chance to meet my friends every day. Therefore, living in multistory apartments provides an opportunity to become socialize with locals. This kind of living in cities helps people to become united who have come from small towns and villages.
In conclusion, the above all reasons justify that it is better to construct skyscrapers towers in residential complexes instead of constructing an independent house because it has given an ample amount of benefits to every resident who is living in a city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their bread and butter. Furthermore, every person cannot afford the price to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26546391753 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99939214269 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530927835052 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.829741178 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.2 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201543575782 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707461763533 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599669388635 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140361353336 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966168582328 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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