Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform?
Many company owners demand their employees to dress uniform at work, because it usually brings many advantages to the company. However, some labor unions claim that uniform also causes many problems to the staff. In this essay, I will consider the pros and cons of this style of clothing.
Let us start with the benefits that dressing uniforms offer. The first advantage is that it can separate employees from other people. It is quite difficult for clients to differentiate workers from either other clients or manager, when they all wear casual dress, but with the help of uniform they do this easily. Another advantage is that it shows the maturity of company. Clients mostly estimate the prestige of an organization by its appearance, so uniform ensures them that the company is serious enough to do business with. Furthermore, it protects people from fire. Many manufactures demand their personnel to wear incombustible clothing to save their lives in case of emergency, such as fire in the manufacturing department as well as hitting brick.
However, despite these positive effects, some labor unions argue that wearing uniform also has many drawbacks. Firstly, it does not always fit. Mass production of uniform rarely considers the unique features of each worker, so many workers complain that it does not suit them in size. Secondly, it often contributes to trauma. For example, many employees break the leg, when they unluckily slip, since the uniform boots deter the flexibility of leg and, therefore, cause a fracture in the bone. Moreover, it is made of low quality. Many employees, for instance, report that uniform is worn out very quickly, because the material, which it is produced from, is frequently is of poor textile.
In conclusion, even though dressing employees in uniform is suggested to be practical for its advantages, but it still poses many problems to wearers as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15434083601 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65673088608 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59807073955 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.7563991789 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307064118656 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805954103046 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638684943176 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177616152941 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534167506677 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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