Some companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is good. Others think there are disadvantages to this.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Globally, sponsorship of sporting events is becoming very popular. Organisations see these programs as a great opportunity to showcase their products to the world due to the popularity that sports garner. While some people welcome this with open hands and look forward to the adverts, others are dismayed and believe this has lots of demerits. In my opinion, I believe that despite some of the threats this might pose, there are lots of merits for which this idea should be encouraged.
On the one hand, those who do not support promotion of sporting events by these big brands are of the opinion that these events have no age restriction therefore some of the adverts might not be age appropriate. Also, it is said that it can promote consumerism. For instance, a youngster might develop an interest in a product which he or she does not need , neither can the parents afford it. The need for this particular item might push the child to partake in some social vices such as stealing or pick-pocketing.
On the other hand, showcasing of company products through advertisement hassled to increased employment opportunities, lucrativeness of the sporting industry, making the games more attractive for children who want to participate as a result of the funding that they receive, more revenue for both the companies that sponsor and the sponsored sporting organisation and job creation for creative workers. For example, Football all over the world has boomed and gained lots of recognition as a result of all the sponsorship it has received from companies like Nike, Fubu etc. This has made it more attractive to the youths and has created a lot of employment opportunities and also increase in per capita income of the economies of the host countries.
In conclusion, my view is that the sponsorship of these companies through their adverts has helped in booming the economy viz a viz the sporting industry and therefore should be encouraged. However, the negative effects of the advertisement can be worked on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05373134328 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89649089583 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.5186750773 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.230769231 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190628506815 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611926297967 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523095498427 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109091257454 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462117909854 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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