In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.

What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Today, around the world, people are gaining weight more than they are exerting, as a result of which the level of fitness and maintaining proper health is declining. This is mainly because of some unhealthy practices that people follow in their daily life which causes many diseases and problems in people especially young adults.

There are several causes that creates these sorts of problems. The main and foremost cause of this problem is that people nowadays utilize food which is readily available. This includes junk food like pizzas, burgers and fries etc. These kinds of foods are high in calories and fat content but utterly low in nutritional value, which consequently results in weight gain but does not provide proper health to the individual.

Apart from eating junk food, people nowadays are very lazy to be doing exercise in their usual course of life as many of them either have busy schedules or are too lazy to be going out for burning up calories which ultimately lead to decrease in fitness level of the particular individual.

Moreover, even children are gaining weight because of playing games on computer all day long and not playing outside. This is the main reason of child obesity which is becoming very common in many countries of the world.
To decrease the risk of diseases and problems to our health, each individual should take some preventive measures to solve these problems.

Firstly, healthy eating habits should be adopted at every home and there should be a limit of utilizing junk food every week and people should not exceed the limit.
Secondly, a thirty minutes exercise is a must for people of all ages. Even a brisk walk is more than enough if one does not have time. Lastly, children should be encouraged to play outside for a particular amount of time a day inorder to avoid any disease or problem at any stage of their life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8722741433 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35177940168 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2689370975 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229102491761 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738837679931 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531073879336 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108562205141 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559080620681 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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