Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed school.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Education is the most valuable asset of a particular individual, and every parent wishes to give the best possible education to their children. However, there is a difference in the minds of people regarding the environment of a child's education institute. Most often people are of the belief that boys and girls should study in separate schools while some other people think that co-education is beneficial.
If children, i.e. both boys and girls attend the same school, the most foremost and important lesson tat they learn is to be confident infront of their same as well as opposite gender. It teaches the children to communicate with both the genders confidently from the very beginning. Secondly, it helps them to adapt to all kind of environment in their coming future. Because when a child grows and starts a lift of their own its is not possible that he/ she will work or interact in a environment of their own respective gender. People have to face all kinds of situation that may come their way so it is necessary to know how to communicate properly with everyone.
On the contrary, it is preferable by many people to educate boys and girls separately. This option is mostly selected by conservative people who thinks that boys and girls should not study in mixed schools as they can divert to other sorts of things that may not be suitable for them to learn while they grow.
However, in my perspective, co-education is a better option as it helps in developing the confidence of a child and also it teaches them how to interact with their opposite gender in their course of life. To add in, I have also attended a mixed school my entire life and I can say that with quite confidence that I can actively communicate and I can say this because today many of my friends who have been to separate schools are not as confident as me and also cannot tackle a situation better if it comes to dealing with the opposite gender.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, kind of, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67543859649 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64396209303 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7169617586 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251088059936 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104073897668 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842248183603 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170645831223 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753734777657 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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