In some Countries children have very strict rules of behaviors in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything that want.
To what extent should children have to follow the rules?
Childhood plays vital role and It act as foundation for kids. Nowadays, rules on children are much considerable matter, however these rules are not made any government but it depends on cultural values and people's live styles. Opinion divide in to two parts, should strict rules apply on children for their behaviour or not?. I am strongly in favor of not apply strict rules on children behavior.
Firstly, strict rules are not necessary to apply on children. it won't emphasize on children career and future. Let kids to do themselves rather restrict them. For insurance, if kid of four, want to drink water in the glass by himself, allow him to do. If we think that glass would be broken then how he learn to drink water in the glass. so that next time kid won't get risk of driving water by himself. Because of this the development of children will reduced and children feel anxious and shy.
Secondly, cultural values are equal important for behavior of any child. Society's cultural rules learn lots of things to children. e.g. how to talk with elders, how to give respect to them Etc. Child with good cultural value become distinct among other children. in developing nations, i have seen plenty of kids who have good qualification but no cultural values. Even they are not good behavior with parents.
Finally, children should have some good cultural value but they should not bound for strict rules for their behavior. after all the children are the future of world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83070866142 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37365009393 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57874015748 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8262538077 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.5789473684 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3684210526 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329342171472 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104077019983 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869497298464 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217864893991 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665684199887 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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