In some countries, criminal trials are shown on television for the public. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
With the recent breakthrough in the field of communication technology, we are able to transform the traditional methods of performing duties. One of them is the criminal proceeding which is now increasing broadcasted on the electronic media. I firmly believe that this method has offered a merit of advantageous to the society, as we shall discuss below
One of the major benefits it has to offer to society is public awareness. When legal proceeding is shown online, it will broaden the horizon of the public. So people would be better able to understand laws, rules and regulations and how overall system works. Furthermore, not only it enhances law understanding, but also make sure system would not be manipulated. If trial is broadcasted in front of millions of people, it will be highly unlikely that an affluent member of society with power and resources will manage to hijack the system in his favor. Thus, system’s understanding and effectiveness would be strengthened if proceedings are open to public.
On the other hand, there are some draws which may oppose threats to the effectiveness of this system. As the hearing is viewed by millions of people, defendant would be recognized as a negative character in the society on broader level. This would have detrimental effects on his career and later life in the same community. Furthermore, if the criminal is a public figure, such as a famous singer, who is widely praised and looked up to by public, then there would be an additional pressure on the jury. In order to cope with the public opinion, judicial members may be biased towards lenient punishment. However, these issues can be resolved by taking active measures.
To conclude, law breaking offender’s legal proceeding are increasing made available to public with the help of electronic media. Although this trend has some drawbacks especially for the offender, such as lost privacy, I firmly believe that it offers a merit of advantages to the society. If this trends continues public would be more familiar with the legal protocols being followed in the courts, as well as system will be unbiased towards all the members of community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, then, thus, well, as to, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0530726257 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91243817455 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541899441341 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9788337559 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.411764706 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121319447542 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401654575342 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388532265673 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743037896342 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172585093046 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.