No doubt, juveniles are motivated in some nations of the world to take a role in part time jobs.While other countries contradict to this trend as they believe that the much priority should be given to studies rather than jobs.This essay will analyze on both the view points of part time jobs as well as opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, part time jobs are very beneficial for teenagers to enhance their skills because jobs have a significant role to understand the things practically and to accumulate a specific knowledge with full of accuracy.In addition,juveniles get a chance to earn a good amount of money for their personal expenses such as entertainment, study as well as consumption.Therefore, they get to know about the value of money as well as good worth of work experience which makes the teenagers enable to make better decisions for their future career.In fact, the spare time can be easily utilized with the right way of part time jobs and it helps to divert the mind of children from mischievous activities.
On the flip side,juveniles should be motivated about their academic study as compare to part time work and they need time to do some physical activities for maintaining their health as well as its very mandatory for pupils to spend time with their parents in early age to learn moral values.Moreover, according to the age period they cannot manage both the things together due to an excessive burden of study.
To conclude, study is the most powerful weapon which can be used to change the world.Hence, teenagers should spend their precious time for study rather than part time jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in fact, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94181818182 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94724973352 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552727272727 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.584674491 49.4020404114 388% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 339.75 106.682146367 318% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.75 20.7667163134 331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.75 7.06120827912 407% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220532965491 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137556487842 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419634974691 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137556487842 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419634974691 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.2 13.0946893788 276% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.56 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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