In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
The gap between highest and lowest paying jobs in one country can be mind-boggling.While some people believe that this is natural and healthy for a nation. I am inclined to believe that the government should put some limits on the extremely high wages.
Those who believe that the enormous gap in salaries is natural and shouldn't be mitigated by any governmental interference. believe that this is the law of the market and should not be hindered. A genius sales person for example who is able to generate millions of profit for his company, It is beneficial for his company to reward him to keep the good work. If he was not fairly compensated, he would not work that hard or he would go for another company.
On the other hand, the big gap in wages may result in a feeling of injustice in the which in turn may lead to an unstable society, and it is the role of the government to keep a balanced society where everybody feels that he gets what he deserves for his work. One of the leading causes of the revolution in Egypt was this big gap in wages. Looking at this example it is obvious that the uneven distribution of the country's wealth can be detrimental to the country as a whole.
As a conclusion, Although it may be beneficial to not interfere with the wages, I believe that it is the role of the government to guarantee an even distribution of the wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75675461367 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8368832679 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185955690976 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790738940805 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703792065816 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11969283176 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994415431569 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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