In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities.
Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
It ıs clear point that with increasing indsutrial revoluation, the majority of companies are being engoureged by government to settle down to out of city center owing to some reasonable reasons for inhabitant of city. I totally agree with this this idea that positive effects of this movement outweigh than negative ones.
First of all, we can count many benefits in terms of both companies and workers moving to regional territories. I try to say that countryside zones can be considered much beneficial as compared to metropolitan cities. Average cost of living would be much more in huge cities such as New York, London whilst these prices could reduce by living in small city such as Oxford, Texas.For instance, A recent studies done by World Health Organization, have shown that rent prices in the big cities are almost double expensive in compared to other small cities. When we look from point of companies, they could have more space in order to establish new factories and production facilities. Giving discount on the taxes in these areas can be good example and encouraged reason for business owners.
On the other hand, since we always focus on only benefits, drawbacks of this trend should not be ignored. By doing this, there might be some problem in aspect of workforce productivity and transport expense. It can be said that those companies who located in downstate have to allocate more budget for transport and make more effort in order to find qualification person. The transportation of goods and services could slow down. Some people believe that transportation in major cities are way faster than regional areas which makes it more profitable and reliable in services.
In conclusion, I would argue that the benefits of companies moving to out of city can be considered positive trend and this outweigh than the negative sides..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06840390879 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71372455262 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5420535228 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177377705113 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637337813121 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464647128259 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110449442418 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140573329588 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.