In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities.Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities.

Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

The rapid increase in population and pollution from the past two decades is a serious concern in cities worldwide. Therefore the law an enforcement body initiative to move industries, out of major towns is in trend these days. Definitely the merits of shifting factories to regional areas overpower its demerits. Let us discuss in detail below.

To begin with, this is helpful for the government to control the population in towns. To go deeper, people living in villages do not have basic facilities namely employment and education. Hence, the attraction of job opportunities, health services, and educational institutes force them to leave their native places to live a better life. In order to, if the industries are shifted to the countryside, the people living there will get employment as well as good infrastructures such as roads and electricity. For instance, the survey conducted by the Gujrat government shows the employment rate in villages is raised by 15% after the manufacturing companies established in regional areas nearby Ahemdabad.

Additionally, it is beneficial for industrialists as they can get rid of the congestion in cities and tax deductions. Because of the factories requires large space to set up their plants, to run the production process smoother while the limited land in towns is a problem for them. Whereas, in regional areas, they can easily set up their bigger machines and they can also save some money, due to low rents and affordable land prices to buy. Also, the government allocates the special economic zones in rural regions to encourage new businesses. Quark city, industrial area and IT Park in Mohali are the perfect examples where some leverages are given on taxes by the governments.

In conclusion, undoubtedly shifting industries to regional parts of the nation is better, as it will assist the government in the development of rural areas and it is a solution of a few major issues in cities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00280101024 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605015673981 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3120538292 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.266666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194497135554 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551099316735 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495848684943 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109613491963 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288488339593 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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