In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

A segment of society these days prefers residing alone in many nations. In my opinion, this is an unfavorable situation, because it is causing the problem of social isolation and making people inefficient.

To embark upon, people who intend to live in isolation generally face the issue of loneliness. In other words, they do not have anybody to talk at home and have to take the day to day decisions on their own. Even on problematic days, they have to solve all the problems with the support of anybody else. This makes their life stressful and sometimes results in mental illnesses such as depression and anxiety. My friend, for instance, decided to stay alone and later on, he started to feel lonely at home, which caused several issues in his life and ultimately made him regret that decision.

Moreover, the decision of isolated stay also increases in inefficiency in people. Living with the family has many benefits as all family members share the household duties, which enable each to them to focus on their studies and office work comfortably. Nevertheless, while solo living they do not have anyone else and they have to perform all the household chores themselves, which consequently affects their education and employment. To illustrate, as the report of the Human Development Institute of India, the people who stay with family are 40 % more efficient than those who stay alone.

In conclusion, many people these days indeed prefer to be alone at home, however, this is a detrimental development as it is isolating people from society and making them unproductive.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03422053232 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71761758949 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.655736236 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167386008562 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586017223879 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469940969253 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114185024291 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380221829376 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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