In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN">A segment of society these
days prefers residing in many nations. In my opinion, this is an unfavorable
situation, because it is causing the problem of social isolation and making
people inefficient.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN">To embark upon, people who
choose to live alone generally face the issue of loneliness. In other words, they
do not have anybody to talk at home and have to take the day-to-day decisions
on their own. Even on problematic days, they have to solve all the problems
without the support of anybody else. This makes their life stressful and
sometimes worsens their condition to cause mental illnesses such as depression
and anxiety. My friend, for instance, decided to stay alone and later on, he
started to feel lonely at home, which caused several issues in his life and
ultimately made him regret for that decision.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN">Moreover, the decision of
isolated dwelling also increases in inefficiency in people. Living with the
family has many benefits as all family members share the household duties,
which enable each to them to focus on their studies and office work
comfortably. Nevertheless, while solo living they do not have anyone else and
they have to perform all the household chores themselves, which consequently
affects their education and employment. To illustrate, as the report of the Human
Development Institute of India, the people who stay with family are 40 % more
efficient than those who stay alone.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN">In conclusion, many people
these days indeed prefer to be alone at home, however, this is a detrimental
development as it is isolating people from society and making them unproductive. </span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.33088235294 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.53939174699 2.80592935109 197% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.736870619 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 191.333333333 106.682146367 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123374520248 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514841783565 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047242211359 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0388194012541 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399797543388 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.03 12.4159519038 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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