Some people think that nuclear is better than other source of power for meeting ever - increasing global needs. To what extent do you agree?
Climate change is the main reason tempting all countries over the world to invent replaced energy instead of traditional fuels like coal. nuclear energy is the number one priority of many countries in preventing greenhouse effect. However, in my opinion, I think that it is not the absolute method to meet ever - increasing global needs. this essay will explain the reasons.
I can not negate that nuclear energy brings important benefits to human being's life. First of all, nuclear energy can creat a huge amount of energy. Researchers had shown that nuclear liberations generate one million times more than hydro or wind power. that is suitable for population boom in several current years. In addition, nuclear energy is not responsible for "global warming" phenomenon. The consumption of this fuel does not release carbon dioxin and smoke. Therefor, numerous nuclear power plants have been built in 16 countries in the world such as japan, Korea and Canada.
On the other hand, if the using of nuclear power is not careful, it may impact seriously on the environment and people's health. radiation is a big problem which needs to be processed strictly, radiation may lead to genetic mutations for the ecosystem. Secondly, nuclear energy is not a recycle energy accompanying with prohibitive cost to construct nuclear power plants. nuclear energy is made by uranium. What if on someday, uranium becomes exhausted? human beings will face to a more serious issue. Beside, until now, there were two nuclear plant accidents, these disasters happened in Ukraine in 1986 and japan in 2011. Nobody makes sure that it will not occur again in the future.
In conclusion, people should conform rules tightly while consuming nuclear energy to avoid unfortunate risks. Moreover, human can take advantage of wind power, solar and hydro to maintain a green environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nuclear
...instead of traditional fuels like coal. nuclear energy is the number one priority of ma...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...to meet ever - increasing global needs. this essay will explain the reasons. I ca...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...ergy brings important benefits to human beings life. First of all, nuclear energy can ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...on times more than hydro or wind power. that is suitable for population boom in seve...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Radiation
... on the environment and peoples health. radiation is a big problem which needs to be proc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nuclear
...cost to construct nuclear power plants. nuclear energy is made by uranium. What if on s...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Human
... on someday, uranium becomes exhausted? human beings will face to a more serious issu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23255813953 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64806481602 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647840531561 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2815464354 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20861476626 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555346136377 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588244101257 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116030571274 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251626625186 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.