Advertisements exaggerate the quality of product
I am assent to the fact that advertising is an advance in technology, however, superabundance of advertisements causes for the exaggeration of the quality of products. It is the second negative sector of advertising I want to discuss about.
I know companies just try to gain dreamy sales through marketing strategy via mass media and advertising is a common method. I will give a good example now. When we are under snow with work and we have no time to go out for shopping so making a purchase on the internet is an appreciated way to save time. For instance, clothes, I believe that all of you used to buy clothes online once. I was a victim, I can search any items without difficult with only my phone, I felt interested in a colorful dress and I pick it. After few days, this dress was delivered to me, I got disappointed, it was not like advertising when I saw some pictures. I wasted to buy a void thing, it did not meet my expectation. The disadvantage of exaggeration is that breaking customers’ loyalty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'assented'.
Suggestion: assented
I am assent to the fact that advertising is an adva...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58469945355 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09505804072 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9238316877 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200998789581 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693263952023 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100542121164 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206912551348 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128814070711 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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