In recent years, many communities preferred to finding historical apartment to live in. People wanted to represent their identity exceptionally and they always having curiosity on mysterious thing. This essay will explore why people are searching historical place to live in and how they can get information.
First of all, they want to reveal there identity through there historical house. For example, when people know they had a old house in the countryside that time they wanted to finding there this place to explore the place and reconstruct for able to live. In add,they would give a character to cities and attract tourists as well. For instance, this community if collect their place that time they would be taken to spend their life and earn some money from tourists.
However, they would be find out their land related information from online. Such as, before going the rural area they would be search over the internet and collect there. On the other hand, tgey would be collected data from Their neighbourhood or regional shops where they were lived in. If they would not find them so they would ask local library, mosque and find in tv and magazine which year they were lived in from there they can search this decades after that they would be find to getting there historical land.
In conclusion, many people are preferred to live in their traditional bulding nowadays. I belive that, they maybe get any paranormal types of information or they want to earn money to using their this land while they can find out from their local people or news paper and most effective they can collect data from internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , they
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...rom tourists. However, they would be find out their land related information ...
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...elated information from online. Such as, before going the rural area they would b...
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... so they would ask local library, mosque and find in tv and magazine which year ...
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...sk local library, mosque and find in tv and magazine which year they were lived ...
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...ere lived in from there they can search this decades after that they would be find t...
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...itional bulding nowadays. I belive that, they maybe get any paranormal types of i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8880866426 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38854434301 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523465703971 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6662930145 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265875918384 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110414104819 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746010351054 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196521287816 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318173279273 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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