In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.
In the modern era, the issue of having accommodation has become highly controversial. There is a a lot of different reason why it is effect on people. In recent decade, this situation is dissimilar for everybody. In these essay I will examine both side of the effects for this circumstance.
Generally speaking, new generation has a different aim for their life.Nowadays, the young individuals want to life in more comfortable and with high standards.However, also they don’t want to purchase something real valuable or expensive. Rather than this attitude they prefer rent such as a house.The accommodation is first basic requirement of all individuals and renting issue has a a lot of advantages.I partially agree to this opinion. Firstly, for everybody have a house by rent.The price is more affordable than the buy. And also, more people in society could be live in luxury house if they want within rent.Moreover, secondly the money for buying house could be use for education or travel.Which these sort of activities is rare experience than the having property. And with this way provide to moving for any time, it’s depends on the personal choice.For illustration, the travelers, students to independent people always doing same things.
Despite of the this advantages, it has a some important negative sides. First of all, when living in the house which by rent, you don’t have to opinion for arrange the house.Because the tenant in the house is not owner.The vital decide always belong to owners.Furthermore, the owner might be want to you leaving the house early.And the tenant could be struggle in tough condition.For example, a lot of owners won’t to student in their property because of this consideration most student have be stay in hostel.
In my view of opinion, this could be advantages for short time, however for long term situation is not effective. Therefore, according to me advantages and disadvantages are equal in this topic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, sort of, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2125 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19965665883 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.05510319 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.307692308 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161469923419 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573645334786 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610573006339 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831388852205 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596628382438 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.