In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather then buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?
It is true that residents still would rather dwell in their homes. However, the majority of the population prefer to rent apartments in developed countries. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of renting a house and provide a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, advantages of renting an apartment are a boost in huge investment not required and more flexibility as to where to live for local people. Firstly, renting requires signing and rarely exceeds such as once a year the rental price rises as the dollars exchange rate rises. Secondly, renters are able to dwell anywhere especially, migrants who are forced to live in rented accommodation. For example, New York is a developed city in the world and the cost of living is very expensive which is only buy a home. Therefore it is cheaper for migrants to rent.
On the other hand, renting also has some major disadvantages like restrictions and tax incentives. Renting allows living in a premium area that you can afford to buy. However, the tenant has to keep the building in good condition until he buys it. Besides, the landlord creates many lows before giving the home away. For instance, it is not allowed to bring pets into the house. Unfortunately, this situation will be difficult for children. They have to give up their little favorite animals such as puppies, kittens and etc.
To conclude, although renting house can have certain negative sides like restriction. It has an extremely positive influence on human's life. I believe that these benefits of renting outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03053435115 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.761470824 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645038167939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6845874217 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2222222222 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288874499362 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768324078229 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477338982525 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164444354745 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466260915011 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.