In a free world, individuals choose their favourite lifestyle freely as much as they do not restrict others’ rights. In the last decade, smoking in public places has been one of the hot topics of controversy. Many believe smoking in public is against non-smokers’ rights and must be banned by governments. In this short essay, I will elaborate on why I strongly agree with this idea.
Today, smoking is accused of causing a variety of health problems such as cancer, heart issues, etc. which are not limited to smokers only. In other words, studies have revealed that it could be even more harmful to not consumers who are exposed to such an environment. Thus, in my opinion, this is the most minor action that countries can do in support of non-smoker people. Besides, being in a place with the smell of smoke is highly annoying for people who do not smoke. For example, once, I got a suit in a hotel in a nearby city to escape from the hustle and bustle of the city for the weekend. However, it was one of the most unpleasant stays I have experienced in a hotel due to the unbelievable smell of smoke everywhere in that hotel.
On the other hand, this decision may cause less smoking which can enhance the health of tobacco users. Nowadays, people spend considerable time in public places like workplaces, malls, restaurants, gyms, etc., and they must leave and go to a smoke-allowed area to smoke a cigarette. As a result, I believe many people, at least for some time, give up on smoking. For instance, I have a colleague who used to smoke a lot during the day, and since he started working in our office, he may smoke just one cigarette during his break time.
In conclusion, in my opinion, forbidding smoking in public places is an admirable decision to support non-smokers' rights. While it can improve public health by decreasing the exposure of people who are not smoking to such an atmosphere and reducing the number of cigarettes that smokers use during the day.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67335243553 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66395834861 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553008595989 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1560815273 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9411764706 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76470588235 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202415725594 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632378480915 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345143923505 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122096662825 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333603040378 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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