Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Few experts think that it is important for children to start learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. In my essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of the learning of foreign language in primary school and try to provide an optimal solution.

Firstly, research suggests that children of age 2-10 years can learn a new language easy. This is the time children brain activity is more and they try to learn basic things like mother language, eating, relationships etc.. In many cases where the father and mother of the children are from different language background the children ends up learning both languages without any efforts. language learning comes naturally to kids.

primary school is the time where the number of subjects children learn is at minimal and also most of the subjects are at entry level. during secondary school the number of subjects and the difficulty level increases and the burden of the subjects might decrease the interest in the foreign language. also a new language might be interesting during the early days of school than secondary school. secondary school is very competitive and children might be pressured to work towards achieving their future. learning a foreign language might not look as good during secondary school

The one disadvantage of making children learn a foreign language in primary school is learning a language is a continuous process and if children stop learning or using it in daily children might lose the language altogether. so it is suggestable to keep the learning a continuous process from primary school to secondary school so that the efforts put during primary school are not lost.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...ther language, eating, relationships etc.. In many cases where the father and moth...
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Suggestion: Language
...ing both languages without any efforts. language learning comes naturally to kids. ...
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Suggestion: Primary
...learning comes naturally to kids. primary school is the time where the number of ...
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Suggestion: During
...ost of the subjects are at entry level. during secondary school the number of subjects...
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Suggestion: Also
...e the interest in the foreign language. also a new language might be interesting dur...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...e the interest in the foreign language. also a new language might be interesting dur...
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Suggestion: Secondary
...y days of school than secondary school. secondary school is very competitive and children...
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Suggestion: Learning
...to work towards achieving their future. learning a foreign language might not look as go...
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...not look as good during secondary school The one disadvantage of making children ...
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...put during primary school are not lost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, in many cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18345323741 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65658867381 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467625899281 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1384471689 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498922261814 0.244688304435 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207145800842 0.084324248473 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130256522331 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342663698298 0.151304729494 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128225483571 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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