Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
It has been observed that nowadays, people tend to buy a large number of toys for their children; regardless of need. It is perhaps intentionally done to distract their attention and keep them busy; this seems to be a smart way of neglecting the child. This factor has some advantages, yet, it holds some disadvantages as well. I will explain both perspectives in detail in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is quite beneficial and important for children to play with the toys. This activity involves learning many important aspects; such as keeping their belongings in a tidy manner, sharing toys with other children and avoids tearing and breaking the items belong to them. Having a lot of toys urges the sense of ownership and responsibility in keeping them safe. In running days, where everyone is encircled with gadgets; it is quite appropriate for kids to engage with a lot of toys that will eventually prevent them becoming the gadgets maniacs.
On the contrary, there are certain demerits of this aspect as well. Buying kids a lot of toys will result in careless attitude. Children will not realize the importance of money and insist on buying every item they like. For instance, my daughter is very fond of toys and every time we go shopping, she buys herself at least one or two toys. She doesn't take care of her toys and gets bored very quickly. Resultantly, all the old toys go to rubbish. This attitude is fatal for children development as they will replicate the same behavior while shopping at the older age. Physiologically, kids who get to have many toys suffers superiority complex as they think money can buy everything and consequently, they become thankless.
To summarize the aforementioned, buying a lot of toys is not a bad habit, provided that consequent behavior in kids is well monitored by parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...erved that nowadays, people tend to buy a large number of toys for their children; regardless of ...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a tidy manner" with adverb for "tidy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...pects; such as keeping their belongings in a tidy manner, sharing toys with other children and a...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s herself at least one or two toys. She doesnt take care of her toys and gets bored ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, so, well, while, at least, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88817891374 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80864289751 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58785942492 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5612760957 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356302694468 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102017299583 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807706124638 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191815740069 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724018119505 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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