In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades.Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
The divorce rate is tremendously increasing worldwide over the past few years. Thought of superiority and stress at workplace are the major causes of this phenomena, but fortunately, there are ways to solve this problem which will be discussed in further paragraphs.
Generally speaking, there are two main results of divorce.One of the main cause of separation is the thought process, in the past couples were humble with each other and they used to pay attention towards their partners suggestion. However, today as both are independent and are dominating, so they think they have more knowledge and they are right hence, they ignore their partners advice which impacts their marriage.Furthermore, stress at office is another reason of divorce. These days, jobs are demanding longer working hours therefore, people are often occupied. This means they are spending less time with their loved ones which makes them feel, there is no room for affection and this eventually leads to break-up.
Despite these challenges, there are a variety of ways to resolve this issue.If people are willing to work on this cause, they should manage to have a balanced lifestyle, so that they can spend quality time with their family.Whenever, one of the partner is sharing his or her viewpoint, other should not intrude and should understand. Also, if still not convinced, rather than argument both should have a healthy discussion which will eventually have a positive outcome.
In conclusion, although people are occupied with work and everyone have different perception which results to divorce. However, one can deal with it, by managing work life and spending fruitful time with family and it will in a strong marriage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24363636364 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81424945589 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9081682034 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.2 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796027249891 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443494330931 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732979725849 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630106288853 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735205116468 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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