In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past
few decades.
Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
The divorce rate is increasing in many places. I believe that the breakdown of the
extended family and the stresses of work are the major causes of this situation.
Fortunately, although these issues have led to a rise in the divorce rate, there are
ways we can solve this problem.
In my opinion, the biggest cause of divorce is the breakdown of the extended
family. In the past, a family was made up of parents, grandparents, children, and
other relatives. This meant that there was always somebody available to help
with child care. It also meant that expenses could be shared in times of financial
difficulty. These days, people often don't have this kind of support from their
families, and this puts more stress on a marriage.
Stress in the workplace is another cause of divorce. These days, people are
often expected to work longer hours than they did in the past. This means they
spend less time at home with their families. It also means that when they are at
home, they are tired and probably irritable, too. All of this adds up to an unhappy
family life.
Fortunately, there are things that can be done to solve some of these problems
if people really want to. People can decide to live closer to their extended family.
They can invite their elderly parents to live with them or look for a job closer to
their relatives' homes. People can also look for less demanding jobs or decide to
have one parent stay at home instead of working. These things require changing
one's lifestyle in some big ways, but they can lead to a happier marriage and
family life.
There are a lot of demands in modern life that place stress on a marriage and
lead to divorce. However, people can choose to make changes to their lifestyle
that can result in a better, stronger marriage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74050632911 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30060461738 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512658227848 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3220064962 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124620678135 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400087427709 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442256428053 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0389726661188 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423772435287 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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