It is often debated that apply more levy for huge companies who makes excessive pollution. While, some oppose that, and argue to consider many other choices to tackle this problem. However,in my opinion, discover new ideas to minimize pollution such as, control of particulate emission and gaseous emission.
On the one hand, many argued to put extra charges for industries that, such action insist them to take limit excretions in some extent . Since, often make tax for such companies would take control over emissions and diverse programs like recycling and effective alternative system made up.Moreover, In order to tackle pollution by extra tariff might be mitigate improper disposal and waste managements Nevertheless, large industries have enough profit to manage such tax and in the modern world most of the legislation under the capitalize hand.
On the other hand, other alternatives such as innovative approach on pollutants may mitigate various sort of hazardous to the core than making levy. In other words, instruct industrial managements to collect and segregate industrial waste separately and proper dispose in the landfills or dumps. Likewise, control gaseous emission by the use of scrubber or smokestack filters to prevent direct entry of molecules and dangerous substance in to the air. Not to be outdone, ensure the industrial managements about the consequences of pollution on environment and individual to enhance humanity through eco friendly approach. For instance, sunflower capture uranium and ferns that thrive on arsenic and so on.
To sum up, in my perspective, applying tax has been a matter of collect money rather declining pollution. Literally, introduce new methods or other kind of actions to solve the pollution would lead to better result and survive environment from hazards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, as to, for instance, kind of, sort of, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44522968198 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82167509244 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643109540636 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.674184806 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.416666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1666666667 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178869592749 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629232406072 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456450978417 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104625274781 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00807510183647 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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