Nowadays, companies are considering advertisements as an important tactic for the successful product. However, this seems to be a controversial tactic, where arguments exist on both sides. This essay will discuss these arguments and provide a concluding review at the end.
On the one hand, those who support the advertisements suggest that these help consumers to make an informed decision while buying a product. In particular, customers can get information regarding new products and its feature. This enables them to compare the advertised product with other similar products to choose the best option for them. In addition, proponents also argue that companies use this tactic to communicate upcoming sale or discount regime in advance, resulting in savings on the consumer side.
On the another hand, the critics of advertisements point out that advertisers also abuse this tool to make false and unrealistic promises, making consumers to buy their products who later feel that they are cheated.
For example, in India, many cosmetics companies sell fairness skins promoting it to enhance skin tone. The opponents of advertisements also argue that advertisement costs are high, and these costs are ultimately being passed on to the customers. Companies that hire famous personalities to endorse products, end up paying them a hefty fee, which can only be compensated by charging the same to customers or taking other cost-saving measures, like compromising the quality of products. By this, we mean that companies tend to focus on marketing rather than the quality of the product, which is deterrent for companies as well as consumers.
In summary, although there are several disadvantages of advertisements, the advantages outweigh it. I opine that consumers need to be considerate and prudent while dealing with the advertisements to choose the best product for them.
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...e false and unrealistic promises, making consumers to buy their products who late...
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...ies as well as consumers. In summary, although there are several disadvantages...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, regarding, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in particular, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47058823529 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07602531357 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622837370242 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0425712504 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.928571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129602602027 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463799436353 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307743389864 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754460143501 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162071085804 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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