Some people believe that charitable organisation should help no matter where they live. There are you there charity should only help those living in the country, where it is based. Discuss both views and give your opinion .
Providing assistance is thought to be a humanitarian act which has been done by numerous non-profit agencies since decades.Lately, the scope of aid has become the crux of the matter, whether humanitarian organisation should be helpful to its native country or can expand their funds for entire world. In this essay, I will confabulate both notions that are given here.
Multifarious grounds can be considered why aid agencies need to be available for the country , where they are established. The first highlighted one is prioritise the tax payers.To elaborate ,the tax is being paid by the indigenous societies and therefore, they have to be given help at first in critical circumstances.Thereby, the social evils such as discrimination, poverty and illiteracy will be eradicated. In augmentation to it, the rate of offensive activities will go on fall if the poverty is eradicated with the help of charities because the destitute class, who is obliged to commit crime just to meet the basic amenities already get the aid. Lastly, in some cases the objective and financial situation may not be sufficient for helping other countries, therefore these kind of charitable trusts ought to spend on local needy segments.
On the paradoxical view, it seems rewarding if nations come to espouse each other through their societies, specially in natural disasters or any unprecedented pandemic. For instance, a well-established charitable organisation can succour the masses of another country, which, in turn will support them in future as well. One such international non-profit agency is direct relief, providing medicines to those who have been affected by poverty, natural disasters and other circumstances. UNICEF which is funded by elite nations and is backed up proficiently to help people around the world. Since, there will be great prospects of harmony among the society as well.
In case of pandemic such as, novel Coronavirus, several organisations have paid for COVAX to combat with such a dreadful virus pervading like a forest fire. Consequently, in any threatening circumstances as we are facing today, the help from charities throughout the world proves lucrative to save life of money.
After discussing various advantageous facts without any doubt, it is evident that charitable organisations should assist according to their goals as well as budgets, if high they need to take initiative to help other out of their boundaries. Ultimately, I concur that nations support each other through their nonprofitable organisation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39698492462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22581997881 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608040201005 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5468796066 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.2 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5333333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173423002852 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514401916974 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389987889844 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907259253756 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242574494303 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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