Leisure activities have a significant impact on the overall growth and development of children. However, it is believed by some masses that educational activities should be inculcated in free time activities to utilize the time in an effective manner. I completely disagree with this statement as I think that leisure activities are for relaxing and refreshing the mind.
To commence with, free time activities play a crucial role in child life in which they can develop their motor, physical and social skills. Children can go outside in their leisure time to participate in physical activities such as running, playing, and exercises by which they can maintain their health. Moreover, they can come in contact with others to share their opinions, experience, and ideas to update their existing knowledge In this way, they can also make new friends not only adults but also older ones. To illustrate, my nephew prefers to spend most of his free time with older people to listen to some stories and history of a culture that is also very important for children. Hence, young minds can contribute to preserving ancient cultural civilization.
On the other hand, if leisure time involves education, the children may be bored and not concentrate on the study. As they already spend approximately eight hours at their school in which they participate in an educational activity. Children need time to re-energize their brain that is possible only when they do something different from their studies. They can watch TV or listen to music in their free time. For instance, I observed a girl in my school who every time engages herself in the study and never participates in any physical activities suffer several health-related problems. Therefore, I believe that everything has its own importance.
In conclusion, leisure activities should not mingle with educational activities. Along with the study, other physical activities also have a greater impact on child health, If the children are healthy then they will focus on their studies and learn the content matter in a very short time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective manner" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ree time activities to utilize the time in an effective manner. I completely disagree with this statem...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bored and not concentrate on the study. As they already spend approximately eight ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16224188791 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80038122974 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548672566372 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3596198649 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23330744139 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886116123127 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451716529522 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165969793773 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598331665491 0.056905535591 105% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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