Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In running days, owing to enormous facilities available for children, carelessness attitude is gaining strength. Some people are of the view that kids should learn the concept of money management at school level. I completely support the idea as this would certainly have innumerable positive impacts. I shall elaborate my stance with valid arguments and examples in the following paragraphs.
Predominantly, one of the most evident benefit children will drive out of this approach would be the adaptability of rational utilization of money . While learning, they would realize the importance of money and ways through which they can spend their amount in more appropriate way. This approach will eventually benefit them in their practical life when they would have to handle bigger amounts. For instance, by learning to use their pocket money in a reasonable way at elementary level, at the adult age; it would be easier for them to manage budgets and finances of their homes.
To elucidate my stance further, another pivotal impact of this phenomenon would be the enhancement of sense of responsibility. By learning money management at younger age, they would realize the importance of money. This approach will broaden their views about finance management and would urge them to save money. I would like to quote my personal example here, in the childhood, I was taught to save one portion of my pocket money essentially. This habit of saving did not fade away when I grew old and this helps me a lot while home budgeting and handling my finances.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, I strongly agree to the approach of teaching kids about finance handling at young stage which will eventually help them at later stages in their lives. I suggest, Government should include such topics as part of essential learning at all school levels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13907284768 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8051252141 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1037207951 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.466666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134870175834 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548270790438 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650171006138 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901605128405 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334741164204 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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