Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
What are community service and their purpose?
There is no denying in the fact that topic of “community services” attracts our immediate attention due to its widespread impact on societies. Societies are made up of its people and if people did not play their part well in building of a healthy and prosperous no success can be gain. In running days, where everyone is so busy in his/her life and has no spare time to give to others, it becomes very hard to find people doing social services. It can be witnessed that often people found neglecting their part that has to be played for the betterment of communities.
Aforementioned topic shows the narrative on making unpaid social services compulsory for young students whereas we can see the other school of thought might oppose the idea. I completely second the opinion of making unpaid community services necessary for the high school kids as this is the time when kids are in the phase of learning and there can be no better learning then to serve the humanity.
To begin with, I would like to throw some light on the idea of making community services compulsory and its importance for both society and the young generation. If we make it a part of their education program, we encourage them to help people around them. The significance of this practice can be understand by this example. When a kid helps his/her neighbor in some house chores like lawn mowing, cleaning of his garden, it helps him in understanding the value of cleanliness. While helping youngsters in playing some sports or in advising related to their career move, gives them a sense of responsibility as they consider themselves liable for the decision. By raising funds for an old home makes them feel good for elders and they can have a stronger bond with old generation.
In continuation to this, we should encourage kids to perform all such community services free for cost as by associating monetary benefits, we might kill the spirit of this service and it will not help us achieve the goal of making a generation of selfless people.
To recapitulate, students should participate in all such activities and help people around them in order to create peace and harmony in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'make'?
Suggestion: make
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, then, well, whereas, while, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.824 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77541460366 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6466586618 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.214285714 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232907991551 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815237579528 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438114811765 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120562320646 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470591525175 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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