Today, human life and how to improve it is one of the greatest topics among people. However, a lot of things can affect on human’s lifestyle negatively such as climate change and economic. In this short essay, I will elaborate how each of them is extremely harmful for mankind, and why I think that the economic will impact more.
Although climate change impacts on human being’s life gradually, in most cases, it will last forever, namely global warming and desertification. In my country, Iran, due to changes in precipitation patterns in last decades, deserts are growing very fast that means a lot of people have to leave their hometown forever, and immigrate to other areas to begin a new life. On the contrary, in some other areas, the high amount of rainfall leads to catastrophic floods that will damage a large number of properties.
Nowadays, economic classify people in different groups in which they have to follow a certain lifestyle that will also affect their mindset. Of course, this classification is not rigid, and individuals can ascend or descend due to many external and internal reasons. Many people have to work for extended hours to earn their expenses. Everyday, lots of people get laid off from their work or are at the risk of it. Hence, economic issues and thinking about how to manage it, is the main concern of all of us.
As a conclusion, although climate change’s impacts are irreversible and permanent on the way that people live, economic is the main anxiety of human being. It doesn’t matter in which economical level people are, they are always thinking about it. Besides, I believe, looking deep, one of the major effects of climate change is on economical conditions. As a result, in my opinion, economic has the greatest impact on how mankind lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ng people. However, a lot of things can affect on human’s lifestyle negatively such as cl...
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Line 2, column 481, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...to catastrophic floods that will damage a large number of properties. Nowadays, economic classif...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... extended hours to earn their expenses. Everyday, lots of people get laid off from their...
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Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...e major effects of climate change is on economical conditions. As a result, in my opinion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, look, so, as to, i think, of course, such as, as a result, in most cases, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91475409836 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66965388539 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.266270513 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18968447317 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628801868171 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406927703757 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112531510811 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512285468709 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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