Some people believe that the country would benefit a lot from more young people entering into university; however, others think that the large number of people receiving college education only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
At present, it is easier to receive higher education than in the past. While I think some graduates may face unemployment problem, I strongly agree that the increasing number of young generations graduating from university can make more contribution to the nation.
On the one hand, college education will make youngsters better prepared for their career. Firstly, by attending university, students can accumulate more specialized knowledge of their major, so that they can get a better background than those who started to work from an early age. And they tend to know how to work efficiently. Especially for the fields such as scientific research, the professional knowledge is extremely important. Secondly, in the university, young people have more chance to participate in various activities, including volunteer works, student associations, internships, or even studying abroad. They can gain precious experience and broaden horizon, which can help them in their future career. In the current globalized information society, these young persons can help company, or even the country obtains advantages in the competition.
On the other hand, some students graduated from university may encounter difficulties in job hunting. As the number of universities become larger and larger, many of the students just enroll into colleges to get diploma, instead of learning knowledge and skills. For example, some young people can not find a suitable work due to the lack of practical skill.
In conclusion, it can not be denied that to some extent, the increasing number of graduates leads to unemployment issue, I do believe that the young generations with higher academic background can make a greater contribution to the state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4907063197 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01125338304 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9452659337 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212411893848 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689243283181 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510375204247 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135678877028 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340601428063 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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