Some people believe that the death penalty can reduce crimes.
Do you agree or disagree?
The argument, over whether capital punishment aids in restricting the crime rate or not, has not been settled yet. I completely agree with this notion not only because it saves a nation from re-offenders and terminate their network with others, but also gives a lesson to others. This essay will explore how these factors justify the death sentence as a way to control crime.
Firstly, many offenders commit crimes after completing their sentences. This is to say, offenders are unable to secure a better place in the society after leaving jail, and often get back to their criminal world because of the lack of effective rehabilitation system. Take an example of Yemen, where Abu Ramal, a Yemen rebel, was exonerated by the government, and he was the sole real for igniting a civil war. Thus, hanging to death is one a measure to control offenses.
Secondly, terrorists have a strong network with their gangs behind the bars. As some corrupt officials allow incarcerated criminals to operate their network from jail by giving access to electronic gadgets. This fact can be better explained with an example of a peace process in Afghanistan, where the country head of Al-Qaida was involved in orchestrating many terrorist activities in Kabul from jail. Hence, capital punishment helps in breaking the connection between criminals.
Finally, in order to curb the crime rate, capital punishment can be used as a tool to give a lesson to other
convicts and the general public to refrain themselves from such kind of activity and abide by the law.
Therefore, the fear of death in public is a must to control crime.
To sum up, the death penalty is fully justified in decreasing the crime rate in terms of giving a moral lesson to the public, stop them from committing the crime again and breaking the criminal network within the jail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion:
...used as a tool to give a lesson to other convicts and the general public to refra...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Convicts
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Suggestion: public
...e a lesson to other convicts and the general public to refrain themselves from such kind of...
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...efore, the fear of death in public is a must to control crime. To sum up, the de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62831179521 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2093390454 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0694432748634 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248623821485 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235718822375 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.036440412529 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197800943904 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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