Good education is one of the foremost pillars of any individual’s mental and physical development. Certain sections of society believe that success in education solely depends on how good the tutor is. Opposed to this view, are people who concur that only students with a good attitude towards studies have a greater success ratio.
On one hand, there are people who think students can excel if their teachers are learned, well prepared and focused on areas where they struggle. They think that such teachers bring in innovative ways to imbibe knowledge which makes the entire process engaging and interesting for the students. They also devise a planned process to guide the students and do a constant followup on their homework and assignments. For instance, MIT is widely popular because of its world-class professors. On the contrary, some teachers who are not that good teaching affect children so deeply that they lose interest in those subjects for the lifetime. Thus, the significance of standard teacher is crystal clear.
On the other hand, others think that the onus lies with the student’s attitude and his own zeal to crack at studies. Such students are self-learners, inquisitive and disciplined towards their approach to education. They educate themselves through various online and offline mediums like the internet, library books as well as network with their friends to help each other. It does not matter how effective is one as a teacher, if their pupils are with no intention to learn or study, the teaching will be useless
In my opinion, combined efforts of a learned teacher and a committed student would be the right combination to the path to ultimate results in their quest for excellence.
- In some countries, young people at the age of 18 are considered adults and can drive a car, vote and get married, while other countries don't allow it. What age do you think is the best to be considered an adult? Give reasons and examples. 61
- n some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house? 78
- Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers. Others think that it’s depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers. Others think that it’s depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16312056738 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75756136119 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4045403002 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197940135714 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668928934544 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699623170757 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115772698266 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100242804985 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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