Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are different opinions in regard to the question of whether celebrities should be involved for solving problems or not. The debated over this topic seems to consist of two irreconcilable camps. In this essay both opinions will be analyzed before a logical conclusion is drawn and my personal opinion is given.
On the one hand, famous people are always under a radar of social media, therefore any blog or phrase about a particular issue published by a celebrity generates a great number of discussions over this question. For example, many actors visited African countries in regard to attract more attention to the issue about poverty in this continent. It brings a lot of debates and rise the subject on a high level.
On the other hand, celebrities can be the instrument in a political competition; or they can create an atmosphere where everybody will listen a star instead of analyzing real situation. For instance, many problems need to be solved as soon as possible. But social debates created by a famous person can extend a final solution for a long period of time. As a result, the problem is still existing but society is loosing interest to this issue.
In conclusion, there are merits of both sides of argument over this topic. However, after analyzing the subject my personal view is that celebrities need to be involved to rise hot topic questions or issues. Nowadays, our society has a great deal of different news every day, therefore we should attract famous people for bringing an important questions up to the level where it can be solved as fast as possible. Given this situation, it seems that celebrities has influence on people and they can help to draw the attention to critical problems.
- The use of mobile phone is as anti-social as smoking. Since smoking is banned in certain places, using mobile phone should be banned as well. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people believe that Young people who commit serious crimes shouldbe punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 78
- The use of mobile phone is as anti-social as smoking. Since smoking is banned in certain places, using mobile phone should be banned as well. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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...ent. It brings a lot of debates and rise the subject on a high level. On the oth...
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Suggestion: period
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Suggestion: question
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...raw the attention to critical problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89078498294 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71171095011 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6023065811 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.357142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148693939505 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519100763953 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442473057225 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939429740445 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305646779549 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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